2023 comment ficathon

[hyojungss]

format taken from 2020 MINI COMMENT FICATHON by 0323 with permission! it just felt so weird being december 24th and not having 17hols around and i'm glad other people felt similarly T____T

general rules:

• one prompt per comment, try to limit yourself to two prompts per day
• anyone can participate with no deadlines, word requirements or fandom restrictions but the intention is to be a casual place for prompts and writing, not to replace an event like 17hols
• multiple fills per prompt is fine
• cross-posting is fine
• anonymous prompting or posting is fine
• filling your own prompt is fine
• please warn for sensitive content at your discretion 
• link to view this page in site style: x

prompting:

 

Please use the following format:

 

Characters/Ship (optional) - Prompt (song lyrics/quote etc. etc.) - Canon/AU/Either (optional)

 

If you choose AU, describe what AU you are looking for. e.g. High School AU, Spies AU, etc. You can choose “either” if you have no preference between AU and canon.

 

 

filling:

 

Respond by posting your fic as a reply to the original prompt.

 

In the comment title box, title your fics with:

 

Title – Ship – Universe

 

 

IMPORTANT: If your fic is rated R, then format your comment title box this way:

 

Title – Ship – Universe – [R]


list of fills:
as far as the eye can see by luckyzukky - nmixx lily 
just follow the feeling by sleepyshamrocks - loona kim lip/haseul
the brain has corridors surpassing material place by virginsuicide - svt wonwoo/junhui
crossroads by goaltender - f1 charles/carlos 
pink and black and blue by luckyzukky - ive wonyoung/yujin 
today seems to be the last day by bookishdagger - svt minghao/bts jungkook
starlight by lachrymosy - bae suzy/got7 jinyoung
coherence by lachrymosy - svt minghao/mingyu
game theory by kisoap - pristin nayoung/svt jeonghan
and none of it matters and none of it ends by deadwine - girl's day yura & sojin
bleeding out, then it was done by pantomimes - jessica/tiffany
cool about it by pantomimes - wjsn bona/dawon
don't read the last page by intoparadise - fromis_9 jiwon/nagyung
usurper by stickie - ive yujin/wonyoung
doomsday (death of me) by pantomimes - snsd yoona/seohyun
they might as well be looking at us by kisoap - bae suzy/got7 jinyoung
the more i remember, the more you fade by deadwine - 2521 yurim/heedo
love fool by luckyzukky - akb48/iz*one honda hitomi/yamauchi mizuki
dwindling mercurial high by kisoap - pristin nayoung/svt jeonghan

Comments

bleeding out, then it was done – jessica/tiffany – canon

[pantomimes]

a/n: i haven't written in months please bear with me... tw for blood metaphor (?) at the end but it's not actual blood don't worry. title from sorry by dodie

It's one of those days, Jessica realizes.

There was no way it wouldn't be, given the occasion. There she is, in the living room, sitting on the table with a half-empty glass of wine in one hand while the other holds her phone. YouTube is open, and she's wondering if she should do this—if she should throw salt in her wounds like that.

It's been almost four years since she left the group, a full year since she stopped checking on anything related to the eight of them and driving herself insane as she wonders what if, what if, what if in the dead of night, but all of her development flew out of the window the second she learnt Tiffany was in America—not only that, but that she was about to release a new single, followed by a music video.

It takes her back to the old, innocent days, where she'd share a single bed with Tiffany when they couldn't sleep and they'd spend hours gushing about their dreams and hopes.


("I want more than this, Jessica," Tiffany would say, and Jessica didn't need to face her to know her eyes were sparkling, putting the stars shining outside their window to shame. "I can see it all."

"We've barely debuted and you're already thinking of going solo?" Jessica scoffed, choosing the teasing path, trying to hide how much the idea of growing up and not being able to be around Tiffany every day bothered her. "I'll let the others know. Taeyeon won't be happy."

"Shut up," Tiffany laughed, gave her shoulder a playful shove, and Jessica could only force out a giggle through the knot forming in her throat. They remain in silence for a while until Tiffany, vulnerably and shaky this time, asks, "You'll be there for me, right? When it happens?"

"What are you talking about?" Jessica groaned and rolled her eyes, annoyed that Tiffany even considered a future where she wouldn't be by her side every step of the way, even if she'd have to swim across the ocean to get to her. "Of course I will. Idiot.")


God, Jessica thinks bitterfly, Soojung would kill me if she knew.

Jessica's ruined, and the alcohol running through her veins isn't helping. She takes one last sip and grips the glass tighter as memories of the worst September of her life start flooding her brain—the missed calls, the messages that begged we can still fix this, just talk to me, the letter she received and threw in the trash after letting her tears fall over the paper, ruining Tiffany's handwriting and leaving the I love you at the end of it covered in smeared, black ink.

Every inch of her body aches with longing and grief for what she once had at the palm of her hands, and the thing is, she hasn't even pressed the play button yet. The title of the song and the name of the woman she spent half of her life loving stares back at her, each word whispering this is what you get, this is what you deserve, tearing her heartstrings apart.

But, to her own surprise, she decides she won't. Not today, at least. She takes what's left of her strength, gets up, leaves the now empty glass by the kitchen, and decides to call it a night.

She tore the wound open again, anyway—unspoken confessions of love dripping from her skin, spreading red all over her pristine, white floors.

She can bleed herself dry tomorrow.

Re: bleeding out, then it was done – jessica/tiffany – canon

[luckyzukky]

"I want more than this, Jessica," Tiffany would say, and Jessica didn't need to face her to know her eyes were sparkling, putting the stars shining outside their window to shame. "I can see it all."

...

She tore the wound open again, anyway—unspoken confessions of love dripping from her skin, spreading red all over her pristine, white floors.

She can bleed herself dry tomorrow.

i love these lines especially!!!! such a heartbreaking work. love how strong and palpable sica's emotions are here, and the memory scene is just the best

Re: bleeding out, then it was done – jessica/tiffany – canon

[pantomimes]

thank you so so much!! i'm so glad you liked it <3