2023 comment ficathon

[hyojungss]

format taken from 2020 MINI COMMENT FICATHON by 0323 with permission! it just felt so weird being december 24th and not having 17hols around and i'm glad other people felt similarly T____T

general rules:

• one prompt per comment, try to limit yourself to two prompts per day
• anyone can participate with no deadlines, word requirements or fandom restrictions but the intention is to be a casual place for prompts and writing, not to replace an event like 17hols
• multiple fills per prompt is fine
• cross-posting is fine
• anonymous prompting or posting is fine
• filling your own prompt is fine
• please warn for sensitive content at your discretion 
• link to view this page in site style: x

prompting:

 

Please use the following format:

 

Characters/Ship (optional) - Prompt (song lyrics/quote etc. etc.) - Canon/AU/Either (optional)

 

If you choose AU, describe what AU you are looking for. e.g. High School AU, Spies AU, etc. You can choose “either” if you have no preference between AU and canon.

 

 

filling:

 

Respond by posting your fic as a reply to the original prompt.

 

In the comment title box, title your fics with:

 

Title – Ship – Universe

 

 

IMPORTANT: If your fic is rated R, then format your comment title box this way:

 

Title – Ship – Universe – [R]


list of fills:
as far as the eye can see by luckyzukky - nmixx lily 
just follow the feeling by sleepyshamrocks - loona kim lip/haseul
the brain has corridors surpassing material place by virginsuicide - svt wonwoo/junhui
crossroads by goaltender - f1 charles/carlos 
pink and black and blue by luckyzukky - ive wonyoung/yujin 
today seems to be the last day by bookishdagger - svt minghao/bts jungkook
starlight by lachrymosy - bae suzy/got7 jinyoung
coherence by lachrymosy - svt minghao/mingyu
game theory by kisoap - pristin nayoung/svt jeonghan
and none of it matters and none of it ends by deadwine - girl's day yura & sojin
bleeding out, then it was done by pantomimes - jessica/tiffany
cool about it by pantomimes - wjsn bona/dawon
don't read the last page by intoparadise - fromis_9 jiwon/nagyung
usurper by stickie - ive yujin/wonyoung
doomsday (death of me) by pantomimes - snsd yoona/seohyun
they might as well be looking at us by kisoap - bae suzy/got7 jinyoung
the more i remember, the more you fade by deadwine - 2521 yurim/heedo
love fool by luckyzukky - akb48/iz*one honda hitomi/yamauchi mizuki
dwindling mercurial high by kisoap - pristin nayoung/svt jeonghan

Comments

cool about it – bona/dawon – canon

[pantomimes]

When Jiyeon invites Dawon to have lunch with her for the third time that month, she can’t find it in herself to say no again.

So there she is, sitting in the same booth they used to share when they were still trainees, playing some stupid mobile game Luda forced her to download last week to disguise the fact that her heart is threatening to jump out of her chest, the painful thud reminding her that she’s minutes away from seeing Jiyeon after a long, long time.

Dawon hears the bell ring and, before she looks up, she knows it’s her.

A group of high school students a few tables away start to slap each other’s shoulders and say, “Woah, isn’t that Kim Jiyeon? From 2521?” which is followed by different versions of “she’s even prettier in person” and “should we ask for an autograph?”

They probably have no idea who she is, that she spent years dancing on the stage right by actress Kim Jiyeon’s side. That the woman who has the entire country in the palm of her hands once cried in her arms on a summer evening, small and vulnerable and insecure, saying I don’t think I can do this, Dawon-ah. What if they don’t like me?

Which, now that Dawon sees Jiyeon’s face on a different billboard every other day, sounds ridiculous. Of course they would like her. How could anyone not?

Jiyeon doesn’t hear the students—or at least she pretends not to, always the greatest of actresses, and keeps her eyes focused on Dawon, her heart-shaped smile making Dawon’s knees grow weak. Fuck, Dawon thinks, a smile of her own blooming on her face as she gets up to wrap Jiyeon into a bone crushing hug, despite all the times I tried to tell myself the opposite, I missed her. A lot.

“Dawonie!” Jiyeon squeals once they pull apart, placing both of her hands on Dawon’s cheeks. “You look so good!”

Dawon laughs and shakes her head, because if there’s anyone that looks good here, it’s Jiyeon. She’s wearing a black, sleeveless turtleneck that makes her look like every girl’s dream—and Dawon knows she’s blatantly staring at her arms, still delicate and pretty but much more defined, yet she can’t tear her eyes away. Jiyeon’s probably used to it by now, Dawon tells herself, trying to make herself feel better about the whole situation.

She clears her throat, and answers, “You don’t look so bad yourself, unnie.”

Jiyeon chuckles, flexes her arms, and Dawon curses her in her mind because she knows exactly what she’s doing. Despite all the fame, she hasn’t changed at all. “Yeah, I agree.”

The teenagers keep talking about Jiyeon, telling each other to tone it down or else she’ll hear us, freaks, she's with a friend, but they keep turning around to catch a glimpse of Jiyeon every other second. It would be a cute scene, if only it didn’t make Dawon feel all sorts of weird.

“Are you not going to say hi to your fans?” Dawon asks once they sit down, and she means to tease her, but it slips out of her tongue a bit mean. A bit jealous, even. Maybe it’s the ugly truth Dawon doesn’t want to admit to herself starting to come to the surface, tired of all those years of hiding behind kind words and polite smiles. Dawon’s shoulders become tense for a while, worried that Jiyeon might bite back, but she doesn’t. She’s too nice to Dawon, always has been.

“Not right now, no,” Jiyeon shrugs, then she tilts her head and grins, places her warm hands on top of Dawon’s cold ones. Dawon knows she’s unworthy of that attention, that thousands of people would set the world on fire to receive the touch of a goddess, but she doesn’t move. She missed her, despite everything. By God, she missed her. “Tell me, how have you been?”

Re: cool about it – bona/dawon – canon

[deadwine]

hey probably have no idea who she is, that she spent years dancing on the stage right by actress Kim Jiyeon’s side. oh my god...ouch. hurt so goodd

Re: cool about it – bona/dawon – canon

[pantomimes]

sooo glad you enjoyed it. thank you <3